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Blood Elf Encounter Part 4      I awoke with a start, sweat dripping off of my face. The dream had felt so  
real that I patted my legs and feet to make sure everything was still attached and  
unharmed. King stared at me through the bushes, his amber eyes glinting in the  
moonlight. I stood up and brushed off, my eyes already adjusted to the night. The  
only noise I could hear was the buzzing of insects. This concerned me, where was  
Reikah? So far the only other time I couldn't hear her clunking away at something  
was when she was fishing, and even then she had sung a little. Don't tell me I lost   Blood Elf Encounter Part 4
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Blood Elf Encounter Part 3      Time to change the subject. I placed my hand on my chest and said my name.  
She smiled and copied my gesture saying "Reikah." I repeated her name; it was  
very nice sounding and quite fun to figure out how to purr the "R" in it. Her nose  
gave a little twitch, as if to hide the fact it was turning pink, and she kept  
repeating my name, trying to get how the "r" rolls in it. I repeated my name  
phonetically and smiled when she finally got it right. Oy! If she had this much  
trouble with one word than maybe trying to teach her my language was not going to  
be worth my Blood Elf Encounter Part 3
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Night Elf Encounter Part 5      I trudged back towards the city, dreading the conversation to come. I  
mentally started preparing my argument. Predicting what was going to happen was  
going to be tricky though. When I made it to the cities gates I almost didn't walk  
in. The guards stood there and watched me with a grins on their faces.        "It's been awhile Reikah. I haven't seen you in ages, but you still stand here  
like a rock that doesn't want to budge. You can fight all the large beasts and  
enemies with no fear, but when it comes to entering this city..." ribbed on Night Elf Encounter Part 5
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Night Elf Encounter Part 4      When the sun rose, I turned to say goodbye to Freyalis, but he was already  
gone. Like the rare breeze which sweeps through the Barrens, so had he swept  
through my soul. It felt like a dream, but the awakening of old and new feelings  
was strong. He left a refreshing new look on life in me. A fuel to my hope that  
eventually blood elves and night elves could live peaceably. I skittered down the hill  
quickly and woke up Draconis. He gave a big yawn and hissed at me for disturbing  
him so early.        "You don't want to be running in th Night Elf Encounter Part 4
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Wed Apr 15, 2009, 12:17 PM
I miss posting art. Like actual pieces of line art/colored stuff. I have a bunch I could post, but no scanner. :(

I feel bad about it to. Like I know a lot of deviants come here to see art, not read stories or fanfics. My story postings are starting to outnumber my art, which sucks because I don't want to be that kind of a deviant. Plus art gets like 20 more responses than stories.

Or maybe that's just because my story is based in the realm of Wow and most Wow players wouldn't waste the time of day reading it. Or is it that most deviants want art not stories - especially fanfics?

I have a project I want to do. A bunch of them. Like post all 492 pokemon. And make all those comics I've been imagining in my head and laughing at. And complete all of my dragonwrought kobolds. And just post more DnD art in general... So many things I want to do... -_-'

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  • Mood: Joy
  • Listening to: Guns and Roses
  • Reading: Rosario Vampire
  • Watching: Rosario Vampire (can u tell if I like the series?)
  • Playing: Pokemon Platinum
  • Eating: Bagel with Cream Cheese
  • Drinking: OMG IT CHANGED - Vanilla Coke

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  • Current Residence: California
  • Interests: Videogames (Wii,PS2), Card Games (Magic, WoW, UFS, Pokemon, Neopets), Roleplaying (D&D), DRAGONS
  • Favourite movie: Super Mario Bros - the real life one...
  • Favourite band or musician: A tie - System of a Down and AC/DC
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock!
  • Favourite poet or writer: Too many to pick...
  • Favourite style of art: Anime!!!!
  • Operating System: Windows Vista
  • Wallpaper of choice: Kratos Aurion, Link, or a dragon
  • Favourite game: another tie - The Legend of Zelda: A Link to the Past and Tales of Symphonia
  • Favourite gaming platform: Wii
  • Favourite cartoon character: Yoshi
  • Personal Quote: "Mur..." ~ when I'm unhappy
  • Tools of the Trade: Pencil, Scanner, and Windows paint, booyah!

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~kratosfangirl32:iconkratosfangirl32: Jun 7, 2009, 12:01:28 PM
Woof!

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There's the holocaust and diarrhea... one of them happened, and one of them continues to happen...
~Sarah Silverman
=Naneko85:iconNaneko85: Mar 19, 2009, 3:44:30 PM
Thank you so much for the :+devwatch: dear!

I will go through and re-read your stories this weekend mostly and see if there is any advice I can give. I am not used to critiquing written works so I feel like anything I say is going to come off rude or something even if it isn't intended that way lol Since it seems that you are kind of wanting a bit of advice ect, I will do my best to see if I can give :)

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*Mew* >^_^<

The mathematical probability of a common cat doing exactly as it pleases is the one scientific absolute in the world.

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~Spritz111:iconSpritz111: Mar 19, 2009, 3:52:41 PM
Yeah no problem! Love your Wow gallery.

As for the advice I'd really appreciate it. I did this for fun and practice (and to see how many random vocabulary words I could remember/make people look up :P). So that is why I'd really like some critiquing. I don't know how well the practice is going if no one points out the mistakes.

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*Lloyd does something dumb*
Kratos: "Those are not my genes..." -_-'

"Wisdom comes with age." ~Sylvia Drakkmord
=Jaicca:iconJaicca: Dec 23, 2008, 7:29:17 PM
Hai random deviant ^.^
~Spritz111:iconSpritz111: Jan 28, 2009, 10:50:56 AM
Hiii! *waves*

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*Lloyd does something dumb*
Kratos: "Those are not my genes..." -_-'

"Wisdom comes with age." ~Sylvia Drakkmord
~shadowkunoichi7:iconshadowkunoichi7: Nov 28, 2008, 11:12:09 AM
thanx for the fav. ^^Sorry it took so long to respond though.

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Heh heh heh. Moo.. XD Naruto Abridged.
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